LOVE & PAIN (DORISIMBRA)

29 Mar 2013

Rajkumar
LOVE & PAIN (DORISIMBRA)

I won’t take birth in your lap, Mother Earth,
since I can’t add beauty to mind and soul;
What purpose will it serve in adding birth?
I can’t fight oppression to reach my goal.

Birds sing songs in blue sky,
Flowers fragrance to wind;
Rivers’ ripples quench thirst,
I failed to add my voice.

Just leading a life without a purpose,
Neither in family, nor as a sage,
Quieten with age, yet love’s river not shared;
I won’t take birth in your lap, Mother Earth.

rajkumar@kolkata
28-03-2013
By Rajkumar, © 2013, All rights reserved.
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How to write a Dorisimbra:
Stanza one: four lines of Shakespearean sonnet (iambic pentameter rhymed abab).
Stanza Two: Four lines of short and snappy free verse.
Stanza Three: Four lines of iambic pentameter blank verse, where the last line repeats the first line of Stanza One. 
Link to directions and an example:
http://randomwriterlythoughts.blogspot.com/2009/10/dorsimbra.html
Long back I wrote one .Thanks to DianeAH.She sent me the link.
Hope it fits in for your contest.
rajkumar

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Biography of Raj Kumar Mukherjee Born in a mediocre family with repute, I continued my study in Commerce.Professionally a Banker with M.COM, C.A.I.I.B., A.C.I.B.(London) & I.R.D.A.worked in various Senior Managerial capacities in a...

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