Seduction of a Stocked Bar.

Bright lights at night
Are mesmerizing,
For now my life
Is satisfying

I drink with you but drink for me,
Turn my problem to a party
For its less sad with company

When the glow of neon waves
Give way to sunshine rays
I find again that
Her soft hips
And vodka lips
Did not change a thing.


I am looking to edit this poem and am absolutely looking forward to some critiques to help me get better at writing. I am just getting back into it after a long time away, with a serious goal of improving my skills so don't hold back.