Bright lights at night Are mesmerizing, For now my life Is satisfying I drink with you but drink for me, Turn my problem to a party For its less sad with company When the glow of neon waves Give way to sunshine rays I find again that Her soft hips And vodka lips Did not change a thing. I am looking to edit this poem and am absolutely looking forward to some critiques to help me get better at writing. I am just getting back into it after a long time away, with a serious goal of improving my skills so don't hold back.
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