A moment, evermore

A name change and little work to the end of the poem, I think -hopefully- a changefor the better. It was suggested to me that i should try writing poetry, I cant seem to write about myactual problems. But here is something....Imnot sure of the rules when it comes to writing and layout, but if i did i probably wouldn't stick to itanyway, so please forgive my lack of experiance, But of course any suggestions are welcome. Blue lights up your face Carried on floating notes Shifted disposition When your lips open I feel you in me Sets my heart, mysoul In motion Tearing through me again Withoutspeaking my name Without knowing my face But, I'd rather know not Your beating heart Than be pulled From your embrace Imagine how sweet your scent might be Than forget the way you taste Perhaps I could convince myself Beneaththe stars Untill day breaks A moment, evermore Worth the price i'd pay? For,I would be Just one of many Among a million same - you might say And you Would never be mine Would never be mine Would never repeat my name