A Secret Poem (REV)

Okay, I had a few people comment saying they liked it but would like to see a little more. And my attempt to fix the confusion on who is speaking. thanks to the comments they help me learn a lot. "A Secret Poem" Revision She secretly tells me she can’t have me secretly and constantly repeatedly says she can’t stop thinking of me. (What’s that mean for me that I have to live miserably indefinitely, now I possibly might only live a life of monotony.) She says she doesn’t want to completely lose us but separately is the path she chooses friends we shall remain as soon as her heart is settled and tame, the thought of losing me she so frequently explained: Would bring her world to a dreadful halt and all she could think is that it is all her fault I’m such a great guy she says" but I have obligations" "I wish you were my man but there are too many complications" I know you don’t want to but you must understand we had such an exhilarating relationship but it must come to an end just know that my memories of us are grand and I will hold you in my heart till we meet again.