a smile - confessing love *revised

29 Sep 2010

·Laurie_B

*Revised with a few helpful suggestions from poetry friends! a smile - confessing love (Forward & Backward) called upon by God Monet began to paint the morning sky deep slate grey and pale cerulean ripples to blend along the rim of existence dabs of orange and cream melting easily along the stillness of pristine azure brilliant golden sheen bold and strong splayed hot across the horizon quiet as a prayer quiet as a prayer splayed hot across the horizon bold and strong brilliant golden sheen along the stillness of pristine azure dabs of orange and cream melting easily to blend along the rim of existence pale cerulean ripples deep slate grey and Monet began to paint the morning sky called upon by God

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Laurie_B

I have been writing poetry and fiction for several years now. It is truely one of my great pleasures in life to create beauty with words.

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