A Soldiers Plight

I understand this needs a ton of work. I plan on revising, I just need a little help to do it. Thanks. Crouching in a dirty ditch Bullets raining down Screams of agony fill the air Stench of death all around I feel adrenaline flowing Seeping through my veins The sounds of fallen soldiers Gives me fight to stop their pain I am the stars and stripes That decorate our flag I represent freedom Work diligently, never lag You criticize all our work All the help that we give But you forget that I am here Fighting so you can live To say all thatstupid shit That you don't even understand You come over here and decide How to save lives with a command I will fight for your freedom Put my life on line for you Maybe someday you'll realize Other people need us too