A Woman

15 Feb 2011

·TylerK

A woman waits in line behind two kids at the corner 7/11. She watches them take their candy, get on their bikes, and ride away. She sets her Ramen and antacids on the counter and half smiles at the seventeen year-old high school drop out. Without making eye contact, he tells her: “$5.79” She hands him the last of her cash with an apology. As he opens the drawer, she fumbles under her coat and her trembling hand pulls out the gun...

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TylerK

I am a 21 year-old student who is looking to find his voice as a writer. I appreciate any and ALL comments. I will always return the favor. :) So, be honest, be critical, and most importantly let me know what you think! Thanks!

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