ALL I ASK...

28 Dec 2007

·Mackie

True friendship is a black pearl, sought by many, found by few. Illusory friendship is a gossamer web, born in an instant, dies as fast Send me one true friend. That is all I ask. Those who seek it can have illusion. This poem has been changed on Willie's advice and I think that his recommendations work well. I have retained the inverted last two lines - I like them!

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