Aqueous Libido

30 Mar 2007

·Alegria

A long stretch of land penetrates the sea. Waves collapse in ecstasy. [This is my first attempt at Haiku. It was a fun experiment. Please be honest about what you think of this and if I have made a mistake in the structure (or anything else), please do let me know where I have gone wrong and I will have another go at it. Enjoy!]

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