Bryan

07 Oct 2009

·Mr-Night

There was a young man called Bryan he was on the street crying he had no choice he lost his voice and people thought he was dying The ambulance came around nine they said to him you gonna be fine they took him inside on a bed he laid then straight to the hospital they were flying The doctor said to him open your mouth, oh your tongue is frozen he gave him some medicine with treatment as any citizen and finally Bryan was smiling

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Hi, I have being writing poetry for 5 years, I have the idea of making the world better for living with a word or act or even a smile :) Please help me to enhance my poetry with your kind comments, and correct me if I'm wrong ( off course since...

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