Chain of command
Time passes ever slower waiting endlessly for the order. Days, hours, minutes pass; the pace of passing relentless, waiting like the tide for no man. The wish, my command my heart takes its pace from you. I am held at your behest. Every fibre of my spirit complies without question. No challenge too great the wanting guiding response. Relinquishing control, overwhelming loyalty. Conceding victory to the one.
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I'm relatively new to poetry writing....I've had some fantastic support from a wonderfully supportive friend who's taught me a lot. I'm hoping he may read this one day and recognise himself... All you need to know about me is I love cake and...
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