Chain of command

03 Sep 2009

·Fondantfancy

Time passes ever slower waiting endlessly for the order. Days, hours, minutes pass; the pace of passing relentless, waiting like the tide for no man. The wish, my command my heart takes its pace from you. I am held at your behest. Every fibre of my spirit complies without question. No challenge too great the wanting guiding response. Relinquishing control, overwhelming loyalty. Conceding victory to the one.

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