Cleanse the Sky

02 Feb 2009

·Deathblade15

After consulting my english teacher on this matter it occured to me that this is set up as a suicide note. It was made as this because it made it look like he was going to die, not that he had died yet. So this will make it seem much better, I also added a coulple more lines. Let the light cleanse the sky let the pain be brushed aside in this bed my body lies my spirit leaving the world behind as I left you felt sorrow just know I will be there, ready to follow as I left you began to cry just know I am with Him in the sky do not show any fear just know I will be here should you be in any danger I will come like a striding ranger as Igo into the bright glow you shall continue on with the show the light has cleansed the sky and the pain has been brushed aside.

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Deathblade15

I am a sophmore in high school. I first started writing poetry in the 6th grade, but really took an interest last year as a freshman. My interests are writing, drawing, Technology, guns, paintball, and most importantly to me videogaming. I don\'t...

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