cold bath

03 Dec 2009

·jamiepaudel

hollow spirits in the water clinging to skin like the dead springs making the ripples cold sucking at the tight end of a spliff dripping pools of water onto the porous pages of a book the plastic cover wrinkles red mirage awes the black and another bead runs down the arm one and half eyes lazily scanning, absorbing, retaining parts of sentences, stomach rumbles, phone vibrates and the brain opens like pandora's box in reverse, sucking in the stark truths of noises, sights and reality...........

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jamiepaudel

Amateur poet looking for guidance. young, and still fragile ... forgive me for my mistakes but through them, I hope to display a gradual change and hopefully the dream of becoming a better poet will come true surely, but slowly :) thank's for...

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