Dear Sylvia

20 Nov 2009

·PlathAdmirer

Oh Sylvia, Sylvia I am you Trapped in a cage No room to breath Oh Sylvia, Sylvia I am you Beat down and broken No soul in my eyes Oh Sylvia, Sylvia I am you Left worthless and useless Sealing all the doors Oh Sylvia, Sylvia I am you With so much inside But no words to use Oh Sylvia, Sylvia I am you Sleeping pills on the stand No desire to live Oh Sylvia, Sylvia I am you A love for a man With a heart of ice Oh Sylvia, dear Sylvia I am you

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PlathAdmirer

I'm just starting out at writing poetry, and I am just looking for some feedback! I would love to improve! Thanks!

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