Dreams unspoken

12 Sep 2010

·Reiliola

***I've changed the last two lines. Don't know if I like it or not. Comments? Suggestions? Criticisms?*** Dreams unspoken, Hearts unbroken, Hopes unmet. Life's a bubble, it gives no trouble, And so I wept. I wept for hopes. I wept for fears. I wept for all those unshed tears. I wept for truths. I wept for lies. I wept for all those sightless eyes. For even though I hurt and ache, And though I've had all I can take, And though they live their lives at ease, Their souls will never be appeased.

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