Drowning in love

15 Sep 2009

·Fondantfancy

A tentative murmur of misted breath on window; delicate droplet dripped splashed frivolously into trickle percolated through puddle turned tranquil pool. Love grew encouragingly cascaded joyfully from its spring source into dancing, bashful brook flowed to a sensual stream surged to a racing rivulet. Gathered momentum and boldly swept along respectfully caressed the river banks before it flooded the easy going estuary where at last it met the sweeping sea and overwhelming ocean of desire. I'm drowning in love. Come rescue me.

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