Ebony's Sepulchre Dawn

Ok...So I used to be in a gothic black metal sort of project/band with a friend of mine, and he wrote all the lyrics. The lyrics were apparantly inspired by a lot of fantasy themes and he had even written a huge storyline for a 2disc concept album and a lit of the lyrical inspiration came from the old lyrics of Dani Davey/Filth, and such. A lot of people have commented saying these lyrics he wrote made no sense and there was really bad grammer, and it didn';t have any flow or sense of direction, just a collection of big words and old english, etc. Anyway So I was just wondering the peoples opinion on this site if these lyrics actually make any sense really, as I am doubitng it but it is hard for me to know for sure... P.S. The project is pretty much at a point where I'd say its dead now...if you did wanna hear some of the music (without lyrics/vocals) there is some on www.myspace.com/adarkfantasy Here are the lyrics: _____________ Ebonys Sepulchre, Dawn Written As A Bestial Tale Winter nights, where storms gather to pray Vigilant awoken from the celestial parade Greet the sorcerer captured for the decay An impulse to natures given attentive dismay... Pour the shadows now Lo! dusks returning palette, Give thine frozen light To I, whom secretly held allay And shatter thy triumphant words Until no longer a beast portrays. (The beast is I, Flesh bitten for nemesis) Gorgeous luna, and chapters through't blasphemy Betray'll best reserved woven emcee... Or the gardens that have fallen, Will detail me amungst the threat Proving our distinct callings Emit from what never died... or braced. I violenty rule the grounds, invoked through't chaos Burial howls descend, Frozen splendour vast my tremble Gasping blind woods, Reaching communally at our feet... And tucked to mine, her tears bequeathed Spread to the wind and covering dawns assembled discreet. Ebonys sepulchre, dawn! Coward the ominious sea, darkest what wilt unfold A strike to mine path Invoked between the lines... Burnt flows the empyrean seeds, A Lave cunducted abound the lead and so, Hideous enthroned - our lycanlord Scorn as the breeze, that entitles fury enthralled Sweeping each reach to our conjuring fall Desparation in the waters crystal nostalgia, That punishes time, left in it's infinate lavings and You rest without ease, reciting each nightmarel feast... Oh, when the fullmoon arises, in thirteen sadistic scenes My soul shan't carry with the wind, unto my belief. Many enemys hast tolened thine fate tonight, tempting pure squall Proving spirits dost feared such a curtail malign. Through the stars reflection, She gently grasps, shattering a vivid elegy... Tonight, this eve... Betrothed emotions in eclipse Lament, thine free to crimson the skies lovesick. Rest assure, grant our shadows be picked and Tossed without friction, fucking amiss! Must I be tempted to kiss her So portrayed in the darkened abyss? Gothic temptress, under moons wick... Glide the epic celstial sheets, until you have fallen with the rain Dost derived visions of thou and I Capture each glance of decay? Six more evenings, drought for my secret love, "mine!" A shrine is born beyond the seas mist, and A fable had deciphered another chapter VI. Lead me from the sea, and return to natures cadaver, land Fraternally provoked, hissing at her perversion... Sacrifise tonight, dusk shalt rise with it's crest I'll be waiting asleep, until the next falls attest "Feline male, forgiveness at lost ease Solitude came much a wail, then appease... I remember his touch though, Dost I fever a memory? engraved, now free Place me upon the throne, and needle at my cunt.... please" Bless My Cunt © Hideous 2006