Fakes

12 Sep 2007

·LosingMe

Sympathetic, Apathetic Oh my God! You're so pathetic! Drowning in your own self pity Please you've got to be kidding me! Get over yourself You're as fake as fake can be And still you say fake is me You whine over nothing Covered in lies, not so deceiving And you're still stuck on yourself One of the popular kids Conforming to the fakes You'll never be real again No matter how low you set the stakes A/N If you couldn't tell I have a real problem with people who are fake. So This poem type writing is a way to get that out for me. Thank for reading. Oh and please dont tell me that you hate it tell me how to fix it. I would like some critisim back. Thanks a lot. ^^

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LosingMe

Well about me? There's not really a lot to say about me. I'm pretty much straight foreward. If I don't like something I'll tell you. I'm a pretty tough critic. I'll tell you like it is. Mostly because I've been through a lot and I know what is fake....

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