Fall in love

20 Jan 2010

·Mr-Night

My ship sunk into your sea and I'm dead in your love the way it goes , the way it comes your image is always in my mind I see you also in my dreams smiling to me, what a pretty face! how can I say the word " I love you " on my tongue I find it hard unknown result, unknown future but, I'll throw a bottle with in it my word on your sea and I will see if your waves bring it back I will live happy! and if it's gone, I'll be gone

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Mr-Night

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