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I remember the smile of a new beginning, My soul longed to find comfort with yours, My heart soared to the rapture of being with you, Entwined in your arms, I am now complete. I hold your love on the tip of my tongue, To kiss your heart and feel tender passion. I find myself infatuated by sunlight dreams, My innermost desires which you have made real. Your perfection reminds me of the dearest flower, Like you, words can’t describe half the beauty, Nor the enchanting and poetic scent of… A bouquet of scarlet roses. Your love is my light in bitter cold darkness; like a candle gleaming into shadow. The twilight glow of the flame burns so brightly, ceasing all feelings of loneliness. I see the dawn breaking purple streaks across the sky, Reflecting the beauty within your gaze, I'll hold this moment forever in my heart, for you have shown me the real meaning of love.