Garden's Door

06 Apr 2009

·Flutter Girl

Drowned in the river's flow Stained by the Red Sea's glow Bound to a heart broke Until I wander through your garden's door Where the iris drinks and the ivy sews The crimson's rinsed in sunshower mist Don't let me pass through like a ghost you once knew

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Flutter Girl

I've only a handful of poems, and all are generally short..would you please take a moment to have a look and tell me what I can do to improve? I am the Chairperson and founder of the Opre Foundation. I am also on the Board of Directors for...

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