God-Shaped Hole (with 2nd verse)

15 Jan 2009

·mackka

This is becoming so much fun to write! The rhyme and syllable structures offer so many possibilities. Reclining A cluster of idle thoughts Shot the breeze til they were sure that it had died Three black birds Maypole-dancing figurines Seemed to whisper that the silent stillness lied The word was passed to Pry the sky apart And with their shovels free the breaths it stole But humble doubts had Seized their mother heart Sleeping in the knoll Until a tall and dapper man Said smiling, “Why, of course you can!” They marked the spot and there began To dig a God-shaped hole Eclipses Stuttered across pallid skies As blind men searched for a matching pair of socks Rising damp Flooded the inland valleys Where the stranded shepherds clung to floating rocks With scopes of all kinds Strapped to their noses Serious men studied each other’s sole Determined to find Trodden-on roses And turn them to coal With grimy smiles the miners laid A weary arm upon the spade That bit the seething soil where they’d Prepared a God-shaped hole

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