Great Discovery of Note

02 Sep 2005

·McJurni

*Dedicated to my sweet lady, Rythmia Your true'ly somethin' special to hold & behold our time together's sweet magic to my bruised & battered soul I'm so, so inspired to say you're thee discovery of note your every touch is worth more than gold every breath onto my skin feels as natural as petals to a rose..... in full bloom your free spirit enriches my own Oh! so inspired to say you're my discovery of note your enigmatic presence hit me out of a doldrum’ blue with such passionate force it felt like a meteor exploded all my doubt about love shoutin' so loud, my voice dissolved the hopeless clouds that were festin' inside of me leavin' 'moi' so inspired to say you're that discovery of note when I look/stare at you I'm forever left gaspin' for air, your smell always excites every fibre of this flawed rebellious bein' the kiss of your lips, OOH! "Down Boy, later not now" blessedly inspired to say you're a discovery of note what do you want? lucky enough to be your man what do you need? to fulfill all your dreams can I provide an outlet to all your passionate desires? if you sure, let me know Yes! so inspired to say you're thee discovery of note I'm not too proud to admit the lady-specie got me in a constant needed flux keepin' us-men on our toes for our own spiritual growth thank You Lord! for creating the better half I'm so inspired to say you're my only discovery of note not always to sure that... in fact it's an unwritten fact I've not always tried my best to my woman, lover & utmost friend that's to be a thin' of the past hear these words with my heart-beat, beatin' in your head leavin' me extra inspired to say you're that discovery of note to whom this may not concern? this poetic piece of inner feel was brought to the surface by my special lady known as Irma with the rhythmic alias Rythmia, who's of to Canada for a couple of month's long live your love, take along all our African love, melt the ice & read this poem, when you’re longin' home I'll keep you in my prayers everyday thank you for inspirin' me today enjoy your stay in the Northern Hemisphere all that's left to say is that you are thee Great Discovery for me indeed....

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McJurni

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