Green Eyed Misery

21 Apr 2008

·LosingMe

In the words that are lies I was lost in my own eyes To see the light So happy, So bright These tears will fall for centuries Help me please With happiness ever far from me I'm drowning in my green eyed misery Passionate and swollen My happiness was stolen Crossed between the lies I see When I'm drowning in my green eyed misery It won't last long and as soon as I'm gone My happiness restored And I could ask for no more But for now I stay Just all sad and grey Soon I won't be Drowning in my green eyed misery A/N Please don't tell me you hate it. Tell me how to fix it. If you take that as an order than you are wrong.. I'm only asking for positive andHELPING feedback. I wrote this last week when I had a break up. So Its a little sappy. ^_^ But I'm better now. And I'm on a writer's block again...If you couldn't tell by this horrible poem. XP Well help me out. I'd like that a lot. ^_^ Thanks for reading. Em!

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LosingMe

Well about me? There's not really a lot to say about me. I'm pretty much straight foreward. If I don't like something I'll tell you. I'm a pretty tough critic. I'll tell you like it is. Mostly because I've been through a lot and I know what is fake....

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