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Another decent piece I have come across and I honestly have to say that I like it Pretty decent material you got here keep it up Wow you never fail to impress me lol I love your work keep it up Not bad for a first draft Sounds like a monologue that could be used for an audition but still great nonetheless Ok not the best that I've read but it just needs a little tweaking Not as good as part one but way better than part 2 keep up the good work man I have to give you a thumbs up on this one is was pretty sophisticated and on my level of understanding so good job and keep up the good work I couldn't quite understand the message that you were trying to convey This is so simple but brilliant You have a very natural flow when it comes to this poem no hassle at all and it was excellent another 5 stars is coming your way sweetheart very good rhymes, very good ideas formed in very good words Nice, light hearted piece. Put a smile on my face Once again outstanding quality Your words always have a way of capturing my soul!! I keep reading it over and over! An outstanding work of art I must say

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I am a button pusher. I stir up trouble. It is what I do. I live in the borders between light and dark. I can write about beautiful things, and joy and love, but I find I am more creative when i write about the dark. I love to hold a mirror up to the...

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