Illusions

18 Jul 2007

·LosingMe

I look in this reflective glass, and wish for my life to pass. Somedays I wish for my world to die, Those days I just sit and cry. I don't feel right anymore, I dont know what I'm looking for. Surrounded by lies and confusion, I strive to end my Illusion. A/N Just a couple of verse i've had stuck in my head. I dont know if i'm going to finish it soon, but i wanted to know what you all think. Also if you dont like it dont tell me that you dont like it....tell me how to fix it. thanks.

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LosingMe

Well about me? There's not really a lot to say about me. I'm pretty much straight foreward. If I don't like something I'll tell you. I'm a pretty tough critic. I'll tell you like it is. Mostly because I've been through a lot and I know what is fake....

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