Joseph's Star #2
Joseph's start #2 Disclaimer: Joseph Van Praet cannot confirm or deny that he has commited any of the following crimes enclosed in this poem. CRITIQUE THE POEM I reserve the right to you block any user who chooses to put anything cute in their comments at my descretion thank you and enjoy. Again the syllable count is 1,3,5,7,7,5,3,1, tell me if I made any errors Some do it for survival some for greed few seek revival some have kids to feed Theft to away from others what they have is material yes materialism ill a disease of the soul is not worth it Art of the con design to decieve those who cannot percieve it will be taken advantage if you get screwed over you deserve to Drug the dealing to provide those who take pleasure in altered reality they must cope it is a respite for their soul life You justify breaking the law of God everyday we still might have daily bread we refuse to have because we still must sin death Man Has set down the we rules we obey morality where do you hide where loyalties lie crime is wrong true yes maybe if you knew (The Romance of Crime)
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If your suffering in any way then acknowledge both the meaningless of it and the meaning behind it. What you express will never cease to be the torrential downpour of your essence. Essence being both what you create and what has been created as a...
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