Kaleidoscope Mind

02 Dec 2010

·hideandseek918

My mind has gone crazy, So take me down deep, To where even the ghosts, And the insomniacs sleep. Past the foggy twilight stage, Through the alpha and beta phase, To the dark, deep delta waves, Where my mind can play. Show me the colors, The future, The past. Show me the life, I know I'll never have. Remind me of the love, I feel in my heart, The slow romantic rhythm, Till' I wake with a start. Daylight breaks, The music plays, The show must go on, So I force myself to say, Goodbye.

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Hello everyone! I just started writing poetry, so if it's not too great that might be why...but positive comments and critiques would be very helpful, since I would like to improve my poetry writing skills :) my love and my life are my...

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