Laughter!

24 Oct 2009

·Eternaldragon

I didn't know what I was giving, This is Armageddon, Your disasters impending, For all your gambles and betting, What's roulette without the gun? Fear in your life has just begun, Your the scab I feel won't heal, Your the wound I feel won't seal, Bleed me out and bleed me dry, Reel me in out towards the sky, Heaven sent with hell to pay, I'll drag you down with me to stay, This is the Phenomenon, Something is wrong, I can't wash this blemish away, In my head your face will stay, With blood soaked hands I'll fall through the cracks, With the mental image of your last regret intact, I'll stay with your body, Watch motionless and haughty, Bitch you we're my nothing, Wish you we're something, I'm atomic like the city, Oak Ridge or Knoxvegas shitty, I'm explosive, And impulsive, See your demise in my eyes.

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Eternaldragon

I just started writing about 2 months ago. So I really dont have many poems only around 20 or so. I have put 3 poems up so far I really could use people input on them and tell me what everyone thinks. Any advice will help.

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