Laurielle

* Critique please! I am planning to enter Gene's Villenelle contest, and I have made an attempt, but I keep reading and don't think I quite have it right. Any comments or assistance would be appreciated. My hands filled with linguistic needs I write upon a slender line Expressing words their task succeeds Within my brain a notion seeds Poems and prose they must design My hands filled with linguistic needs They write of love and hope it feeds The bones so delicate and fine Expressing words their task succeeds Creatively I plant the seeds To stroke caress and intertwine My hands filled with linguistic needs An ordinary thought proceeds Curled on the concepts they define Expressing words their task succeeds Convey the gist each word agrees To reach the page through hands of mine My hands filled with linguistic needs Expressing words their task succeeds