Life's Secret Love

The one guy that I met this past weekend. . played guitar & wanted me to write a song for him about " . . . . "(try to figure it out through the poem!) I'm a nice person & did write him one though its not gonna work out between us, so tell me what you think! And should I or shouldn't I give him this? I think its one of the best things I've written :) Give any advice or any critique to fix this! Because I might just give it to him & i would like him to be blown away & feel like a complete idiot :) hah thanks. V1: Dripping from the dark places, Flowing down heartbroken faces, It's a forgotton necessity. Falling from the grayest skies, Running from the saddest eyes And still yet, you'll never know. . . B: It can show us the way, Create rain any other day, And its never right to say, we don't need it anyway. . 'cause CH: It speaks words that are never spoken, Mends thee hearts that were always broken. Trust this gift, it'll never be stolen from you. . . Heals that wounds that bleed before us, Quenches the living and fuels the chorus that sing this very song. . . It's the love of life we didnt know all along. V2: Rising slowly from the clear glass, Soaking through the fresh-cut green grass, It's invisibly everywhere. It talks to us, but we can't hear it It does end lives, but we can't fear it. . for all it's done for this world & to come its mezmorizing, that it's the one . . . that (CH) v3: Dripping from my darkest place, Flowing down my heartbroken face, It's my forgotton necessity. Falling frommy grayest skies, Running from my saddest eyes And still yet, you'll never know. . .