Lifeless

Lie lifeless on the bathroom floor Your heart beating Your lungs bleeding And all you want is more Crimson red The color you bled Forcing out more It's just everything you abhor Smothering dead Feeling lifeless on the bathroom floor You have nothing for your alibis Dead, swolen with lies Rotten soul Losing, Lost all control A/N Just a few lines from a poem that I wrote at school today. I didn't finish it. I just wanted to know what yall thought of it before I do. All I ask is for you not to tell me that you hate it just to give me constructive critisim. Thank you for your time.