Living Dead

Walking down the street, your knife still in my heart Life is drained from my body, but still my life goes on Going through the motions as if I feel a thing You've killed me, but somehow I still breath My spirit is dead, I'm waiting For the day my body dies too I'm dead, but I'm still living only for you [[Okay so I know it needs a lot of work, but to me it's about 3am. I just woke up with this in my head, so I thought I'd post it real quick. I'll probably be thinkin about it all night at work, so it'll be critiqued by me tomorrow, but just wonderin if it's an idea worth working on. Any comments you have would be greatly appreciated.]]