Mending The Kid

Sitting here with my dark shades on Wondering what went wrong With my life With my time All my friends are so long gone Can't help but wondering what went wrong If I could make it up to you I could beg and plead But I dont think that would cover my greed I could try all Night To try to make it right But I can see that would get me no where Unfortunately I think I've screwed this up Royally So much for fixing this one If I could Make it up to you I would bring back the memories To try to help make it better I'm horrible at Mending So who am I kidding? If I could make it up to you I can try and I try But in the end the want will die, It will die I could beg and I can plead But in the end all you will ever see is my greed, My greed A/N I write a lot of songs. But I haven't written any since like last summer. I lost my muse and I really haven't been on here in like a year. so its strange. If you read this I was going to ask a question too. I wrote this story in poem form. Its kind of long but and its a true story I think its awesome but I wanted some crit back on it and I was wondering if you think it'd be a bad idea to post it section by section? Thanks for your help and for reading! Greatly appreciated. :D