Mesenteric Quilt - The Silent Vow

**Please feel free to critique, I think this could use some work, but I seem to be stalled, any help appreciated! ** the essence of this life trimmed in creamy sunrays of deep fortitude and solid truths the rock upon which they come to rest knowledge that light endures without the need to live in shadows or lose the flame to cruel winds a comforting nocturnal serenade of vitality and illumination smeared across the celestial canvas bursting skyward to drift and settle like dust across the heavens enfolding everything a powerful divine of soft spoken whispers and delicate images hidden deep radiance thrust outward slashed with bloodcrimson washed awaybysilent tears bereft and solitary