My Bittersweet Memories

In the shadows of darkness, grey clouds weep with despair, each moist drop that fell never reached the frozen ground One lone candle appeared, the clouds began to clear, warmth seeped through Oh so glorious, so tender From dawn to dusk, sugar and spice caressed, the bitter cold ice, Oh sweet days, sweet nights A dark crimson wrath, bound the lovely sun, devoured its sweet honey breath, gentle love, lost forever The cold blue sea washed, over the solemn stone arch, grey curtains drawn over, the bitter sweet memories -s.p- ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Note: The poems a story of mixed emotions, of how i felt, before and after, my best friend stopped talking to me.. Please tell me how i can improve :). Thankyou. :)