My two hands

10 Sep 2009

·Mr-Night

My two hands my left and my right always fight My right help, care and love My left beat, steal and hate they don't belong to each other tho they are twins they all think they have to mend the other one that's the only idea they share getting no where they're fighting one day they challenged each other to taste their paths and judge if the other way is the best to forever walk My right hand got ill when it touched evil the feeling of reaching sins surrounded it with thoughts that the sun has died and the darkness is its prison My left hand shed tears when it has done good for the first time it saw the sun how it lights its heart the tears burned every sin it made now they shake each other no more fighting!

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