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***I know this one needs work. 
Please, I won't shoot you if you criticize it. Tell me what I did wrong so I can fix it*** 
One wish, she said, 
I have one wish to give. 
A wish for all eternity— 
A wish to die or to live. 
Think careful, she said, 
Of all that you’d lose 
If to live forever 
Is the wish that you choose. 
Think careful, she said, 
Of the pain you would escape 
If you were to choose 
To accept your sweet grave. 
Think careful, she said, 
Before you decide. 
Is it truly better, 
To live than to die? 
One wish, she said, 
One choice you must make. 
Choose wisely, she said, 
Your joy is at stake.