Raindrops underwater

27 Aug 2009

·Fondantfancy

If I lie here beneath the water, very still, hardly breathing; I can see the tension on the surface. Glassy smooth reflections in depthless tranquility. Cool, transparent lair perfect circling ripples coil and intertwine. Spirals loop and cross each pendant drop noted by perceptible motion. Audible to me alone....the sound of raindrops underwater.

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