Rose in a Dream

This is a style I been expirementing with. "Shifter" poems flow from one subject to another. Feedback on whether ya like the style or not. but just had ot put this in so ya don't think I'm ADD or sumthin Repayed for my sins I awoke from my shame To a horizon on fire A rose bathed in flame The beauty was there Alongside the pain And inside the scorch The heart still remained Nothing had changed Save the outer appearance And that was my dream With no sick interference A dream to have love Lay claim to my being And within the moment My eyes were agreeing Dreams are quite real Though few pay in full They can shatter you down Or build you to rule They can cause hurt An eternitys misery Or bring you smile To outlast a tragedy They have brought empires Down to there knees And done the impossible In a manner of ease And despite all of this I have still yet to see Whether dreams have the power To come and save me