Running Circles

17 Sep 2007

·LosingMe

Circles, Circles around my head Running circles nearly dead Back and forth Around and around Lose my balance Fall to the ground Mostly dead now Here on the floor Dizzy, Spinning Searching for more The ground so cold, so cold Here my time will grow old Circles, Circles around my head Running circles mostly dead Better now three days cold Under the ground In the casket No heart beat, no sound So here I lay Here I'll stay With circles, circles around my head Running circles now I'm dead A/N Just a little something I wrote today in first hour. I hope you like it. Please don't tell me that you hate it but tell me how to fix it. Thanks! ^^

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LosingMe

Well about me? There's not really a lot to say about me. I'm pretty much straight foreward. If I don't like something I'll tell you. I'm a pretty tough critic. I'll tell you like it is. Mostly because I've been through a lot and I know what is fake....

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