Shatter-Proof

25 Dec 2010

·hideandseek918

When you stopped me in the alley, And pulled my face close to yours, I knew you were going to kiss me, Oh yes, of that I was sure. Your lips had felt like heaven, And your embrace had felt like home, You told me it felt like the first time, But to me, we had felt all alone. The world had been so quiet, And everything so serene, It felt like we lived in a snowglobe, no one else, only you and me. I love you so, with all of my heart, to me you are what truly matters, I hope more kisses feel like the start, I hope our snowglobe never shatters. :)

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Hello everyone! I just started writing poetry, so if it's not too great that might be why...but positive comments and critiques would be very helpful, since I would like to improve my poetry writing skills :) my love and my life are my...

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