Shive a shallot

26 Jan 2010

·Fondantfancy

As each golden coat peels away; pale flesh revealed eyes sting, full of tears. Dreams stripped away; onion skin layers secrete a whim, a desire hidden. Soul searching eyes momentarily blinded by what’s before, not looking ahead to any possibility of consequence. A taste too powerful to consume in this raw state of display. Strong, unadulterated fierce burn bites. And when we’re down to the last membrane; will what we find make us cry?

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I'm relatively new to poetry writing....I've had some fantastic support from a wonderfully supportive friend who's taught me a lot. I'm hoping he may read this one day and recognise himself... All you need to know about me is I love cake and...

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