Somewhere Out There

24 Aug 2008

·chxnugg

I need a closing stanza, the one i have is very weak, so it is not posted here, but i am having a hard time coming up with one that will suffice Somewhere out there, kids are hit. People fight, yet none will quit. Somewhere out there, kids die-- People forgotten, while no on will cry. Somewhere out there children drink. Adults neglect, and no one will think. Somewhere out there, children scream. People give up, the world should dream. Somewhere out there, kids flee. People abandoned, that others won’t see. Somewhere out there, kids can’t eat. People tortured, but can’t be beat. The world’s not perfect, don’t live in lies. So look past your life, and open your eyes. For somewhere out there, or even right here, Are problems they face, then learn not to fear.

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chxnugg

I\'m a total of 62 inches tall. I play basketball, and love working out and just being active. I love people. Trust is huge to me. I love going on random adventures that have no point in the world. I enjoy taking pictures. I am a senior in high...

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