Strong Women

This is the first poem i've ever written, and i'm pretty sure it isn't finished. There are a few things I would very much like to hear about: what you think about my poem, does it feel unfinished, and if so how do you suggest I conclude it, do you have any suggestions to improve it, and lastly suggestions for a title. Thanks This is for the women out there, whose strength shines through as beauty in everything they do. This is for the women out there, who dare to know what they want, and are unafraid to go get it. This is for the women out there, who protest when society tells them they are less than. This is for the women out there, who have the will to be happy, on their own terms. You are beautiful. Your spirit, ambition, and pride make you more lovely, not less. This is for the women out there, who don't want to be ladylike. This is for the women out there, who are afraid of what "they" will think. This is for the women out there, who were raised to think they were inferior. This is for the women out there, who were taught to be meek. Strength is beautiful. Embracing your power makes you more fascinating, not less. This is for the women out there, who want something great, but are scared for whatever reason. This is for the women out there, who have a dream, but are afraid to persue it. This is for the women out there, who know who they want to be, but doubt themselves. This is for the women out there, who are much stronger than they know. Empowerment is beautiful. Going after what you really want makes you more enticing, not less. This is for the women out there, who want equal rights for all their sisters. This is for the women out there, whose love is the foundation of families. This is for the women out there, who know to get what you want, you must fight for it. This is for the women out there, won't give up, no matter the cost. Conviction is beautiful. Standing up for what you know to be right makes you more gorgeous, not less.