Submergence

Submergence Take me, and break me, lust to feel it found And make me, will you grace me, as the swells within surround And place me, and make me ..deeper into anywhere.. And change me, disarrange me, forget the very ground Will you see me, will you be me, excite from all around And make me, will you make me ..into anywhere.. Can you take me, dont mistake me, as the dreams dissolve Can you find me, right inside me, as the sole resolve And you break me, but you grace me ..take me anywhere.. .. Alright, I dont usually write what these things are about but I will this time. Its about losing yourself completely to sound, escaping into that sweet haunting abyss. Its lyrical and borrows from an existing songs structure. Im working at writing melodically. I apreciate any sort of input, and yup I know the meter isnt spot on but when its sung it works great.