Summer worse than others?

30 Jul 2008

·MichaelG

[First draft-comments/critiques more than welcome!] I can tell it's the summer because of the smell on the bus the hustle & bustle&kids making a fuss because it's hot & it's humid & an ice cream's a must. I can tell it's the summer because of the queues on the road & the tarmac is melting & the summer dress code overweight peoplegoing topless seems to be a la mode I can tell it's the summer because the sun's burning my skin & the flies have formed an army inside my dust bin I'm still feeling an itch from this blasted wasp sting so please tell me Lord, when will Winter begin?

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