the cavities of sinners

hey there everyone =) i'm not sure how i feel about this poem; i don't really know what to do with it. please help me! (it's now revised, but i'm still not sure about it) ______________________________________________________________________________ so look at it like this, sweetheart. you're a treat so sweet the sinners greet and die to taste your eden's meat. and yet, the sinners that you want, they play their games and sweetly taunt the little things you thought you thought. they want to sing your slip, your fault. and once you fall from sleep - take a peek - you'll have beautiful eyes, but they'll eat you alive, because you are beautiful, beautiful meat.