The Common Life

22 Jan 2008

·Irjasen

Revised 1: Common life, Oh, how much I desire you, Just about thirty thousand times. Work. Eat. Sleep. or should i write it like this Revised 2: Common life, Oh, how much I desire you, Just about thirty thousand times. Work. Eat. Sleep; Just about thirty thousand times. Oh, how much I desire you, Common life.

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Irjasen

I wish i had more time to really get into writing...

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