The Knight of Old

03 Jul 2008

·akeipas

With foreign thoughts and singing sword the knight of old went abroad His ebony skin, his ivory hair, he rode upon the queen of the mares His lips did not move not to speak a word, a vow once taken his voice not since heard He travelled till his locks where long, he travelled not to right a wrong He travelled till he'd forgotten his name, he travelled not for glory or fame He travelled till he sighed at reflections, he travelled not for a woman's affections He travelled till he was old and wise, he'd travelled because the free bird flies He opened his lips "cellar door" he cried he'd broken his vow and with that he died (I feel the flow could be better in places and I'm not too happy with the sixth stanza but otherwise I hope you like it)

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